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본 연구는 사회에서 일탈과 법을 어긴 사람들의 심리(의식, 무의식)적 탐구를 통해 이들이 범죄를 저지를 수밖에 없는 내면적 아픔과 그 아픔을 어떻게 다루어야 하는가를 분석하였다. 결국 범죄의 시작은 사랑의 결핍으로 시작 된 것이며 그 범죄를 저지른 자에게 결핍된 사랑의 환경을 제공해주는 것이 교정의 궁극적인 방법이 될 수 있다는 것을 인간의 무의식적인 그리고 뇌 생리학적인 현상으로 설명했다. 그리고 또한 큰 틀에서는 보다 존중받는 환경에서 안정된 보호와 치료적 프로그램이 필요하며, 그러기 위해 첫 번째로 해야 할 것은 교도소를 거대한 치료 공동체로 만들어야 한다는 것과 이들이 나쁜 사람이 아니라 이들도 피해자였고 아픈 상처가 있는 사람으로 처벌의 대상이 아니라 치료의 대상으로 인식의 전환이 필요하다.

This study analyzed the inner pain of those who committed crimes and errors in the society through researching both of the conscious and unconscious states of theirs and how to deal with their inner pains. The researcher explained that the lack of love is the ultimate cause of beginning of committing crimes and the ultimate correction of the tendency of committing crimes is that the society is to offer them the environment of love, through the unconsciousness and brain physiological phenomenon. In addition, they need steady care and healing program with more respect. In order them to be healed from that tendency of committing crimes, the prison shall be a huge healing community and the society needs to change of its thought that they are not the ones to be punished but to be healed because they are not bad people but the victims.

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ABSTRACT Background Sprengel’s deformity is a malpositioning anomaly characterized by dysplasia and elevation of the scapula. After Sprengel’s deformity corrective surgery, an abnormal scapulohumeral rhythm can be generated because of relative stiffness. An elaborate corrective exercise program is needed to prevent the recurrence of the deformity and maintain the effect of the surgery. Study design A single-subject case study. Observations The scapular elevation height and scapular upward rotation angle were measured to confirm the scapulohumeral rhythm during 80° shoulder abduction using am electromagnetic system in an 8-y-old girl who had undergone Sprengel’s deformity corrective surgery 3 y earlier. Shoulder abductor strength were measured using a Smart KEMA strength measurement system, with and without restricted scapular elevation. An elaborate corrective exercise program, including five types of exercises, was prescribed for 6 wk. The child’s parents were instructed to ensure that scapular elevation was restricted during the exercises. Scapular elevation and upward rotation were measured pre, 2, 4, and 6 wk after an elaborate corrective exercise program. Scapular elevation and upward rotation during 80° shoulder abduction were significantly decreased, and shoulder abductor strength with restricted scapular elevation was significantly increased 6 wk after the elaborate corrective exercise program. Conclusions After Sprengel’s deformity corrective surgery, an elaborate corrective exercise program is necessary to enable control of scapular elevation during humeral elevation.

등근육 불균형 교정 복합 프로그램이 불균형적으로 발달된 운동선수들의 좌우 불균형 교정에 미치는 효과를 분석하고자 경력이 4년 이상인 오른손잡이 남자 배드민턴 선수 30명의 등근육 모아레와 근전도를 분석한 결과는 다음과 같다. 견갑골의 기울기 각도가 감소하여 견갑골이 해부학적으로 정렬되는데 도움이 된 것으로 판단된다. 등근육의 기울기 각도는 왼쪽보다 오른쪽이 통계적으로 유의하게 감소한 것으로 나타났으며 등근육의 좌우 불균형 비율도 감소한 것으로 나타났다. 오른쪽 척추기립근에서 근활성도가 감소하였으며 척추기립근이 승모근보다 좌우 불균형 교정에 더 높은 비중을 차지하고 있는 것으로 나타났다. 교정 프로그램은 약한 부분의 근 활성도를 높이는 것보다는 강한 부분의 근활성도를 낮추어 균형을 맞추는 것으로 사료된다. 최종 결론으로 등근육 불균형 교정 복합 프로그램이 불균형적으로 발달된 선수들의 등근육 좌우 불균형을 감소시키고 불필요한 근육의 활성도를 낮추는데 도움이 되는 것으로 판단된다.

The results of back asymmetry correction complex program on the correction effects for the asymmetrically developed athletes after analyzing 30 right-handed male badminton player’s back moire topography and EMG. Inclined scapula angle was decreased so that the scapula was arranged anatomically straight. Right side back inclined angle was decreased more than left side, and the left-right asymmetry ratio was also decreased. EMG of right erector spinae was decreased statistically, while erector spine muscle was found to be higher role to correct left-right asymmetry. Complex program decreased the muscle activity of strong side rather than increasing weak muscle’s activity to reduce left-right asymmetry. For the final conclusion, back asymmetry correction complex program was found to be effective for correcting left-right asymmetry of asymmetrically developed athletes and reducing activity of unnecessary muscles.

The body has its own healing potency, although it may sometimes need support when its own natural sources of healing energy are depleted or unbalanced. When humans got a sick, it is important to investigate their bad habits before resentment to oneself or another person. They must be changed themselves after investigate about their life habits, food habits, and mind. So they need to train education for correction of bad habits for health life. Especially humans must make their life simply, and moderate terribly for wellbeing. They must not stay at past time, and must forget. If they do not forget, they have no present time. As they are hung on past time, they are become an object of present health concern. As all kinds of diseases come from past time, they are making a living present time in pain. They are strenuous in today's life because of being tied up themselves by past habits. Many are sick people because of past habits, although the doctor said it is all right by diagnosis. These men are person caught by not in present time but in past time. They are slaves caught by past time and try to cure of their diseases. We make a living together with diseases. There are much problems that make body unhealthy states. So we must realize to listen the self-body's messages in order to diagnose and manage for ourselves about our body for good health.We must pray in undivided attention, work by the sweat of our brow in daytime, study hard in night time. Also, always do exhausting work not to loose from free mind and be very healthy. Health is to protect the self body. So must free from delusion, especially. Make a ceaseless effort for making good habits. It is that to make a ceaseless effort is to study, to study is to model after a pattern and to behave oneself. And try to change from habits to character. And not be a slave with greed because all kinds of diseases come from greed. So if they throw greeds, and if they change bad habits, all kinds of their diseases will be cured. For that we must change our environment.

초등학교 SW교육의 내용은 컴퓨터과학을 기반으로 하는 언플러그드교육을 적합한 교육방안으로 제시하고 있다. 언플러그드교육에 주된 구성요소인 정보표현 교육 내용 중 데이터 에러 검출과 수정에 대한 교육자료와 교수법이 부족하여 우리나라 학교 현장에 도입하기에 어려움이 있다. 본 연구에서는 이 주제와 관련된 선행 연 구를 바탕으로 초등 고학년의 발달단계에 적합한 교육자료를 개발하였다. 학습모형은 학습자의 자기 주도적 문 제해결 탐구과정과 조별 활동중심학습으로 구성 하였다.

CS Unplugged education at the base of computer science is emphasized as an instrument for teaching the basic principles of Elementary SW education. One of the main components of CS Unplugged education is the digital education, and this materials for elementary education are very lacking. So We’ll present the data error detection and correction materials for elementary school classes. Learning model is a process of self-directed problem solving process and group activity-based learning.

본 연구는 부정렬증후군을 이해하기 위해 10가지 항목을 자가진단 테스트로 작성해 일반인들의 이해를 돕고, 의 식적으로 바른 자세를 인식시키기 위해서 진행되었으며 실험 대상자는 자가진단 테스트 항목 중 3가지 이상을 가지고 있고, 다리 길이 차가 10mm 이상 나는 대상자를 선정하여 실험하였다. 골반의 변위가 신체의 각 부분에 변화를 줄 수 있기에 골반 교정의 효과를 알아보기 위해 실험 측정 마지막 12주 후 대조군을 대상으로 골반 교정을 통해 일시적으로 신체의 변화를 줄 수 있는지를 살펴보았으며 부정렬증후군을 대상자로 12주간 골반 교정 후 웨이트트레이닝을 실시하는 데 운동 방법을 다르게 하였을 때 효과가 달라질 수 있는지 편측 운동군과 양측 운동군으로 나누어 프로그램을 진행하여 다음과 같은 결과를 보였다. 웨이트트레이닝 프로그램 간에는 측만 각도의 차이는 없었지만, 대조군과 편측 운동군에서 측만 각도의 차이를 보였고, 웨이트트레이닝 프로그램 간에는 골반 변위의 차이는 없었지만, 대조군과 편측 운동군에서 골반 변위의 차이를 보였고, 대조군과 양측 운동군에서 골반 변위의 차이를 보였다.

This study was conducted to help the general public understand and consciously recognize the correct posture by writing 10 items as self-diagnosis tests to understand Malalignment Syndrome. The subjects were selected and tested with at least 3 items of self-diagnosis test with a leg length difference of 10mm or more. Since pelvic displacement can change each part of the body, we examined whether pelvic correction could temporarily changed the body through pelvic correction in the control group after the last 12 weeks of the experimental measurement, weight training after pelvic correction 12 weeks was conducted for patients with Malalignment Syndrom, and the program was divided into one-sided and two-sided exercise groups to see if the effect could be different if the exercise method was different. There was no difference in the scoliosis angle between the weight training programs, but there was difference in the scoliosis angle between the control group and the one-side exercise group, there was no difference in pelvic displacement between the weight training programs, but there was a difference in pelvic displacement in the control group and one-sided exercise group, and there was a difference in pelvic displacement in the control and both-sided exercise groups.

본 연구의 목적은 탄성밴드 사용유무에 따른 골반교정 발레플로어 프로그램이 출산경험이 있는 여성의 골반 및 자세에 미치는 영향을 분석하는 것이다. 연구 대상자는 서울시 강서구에 거주하고 있는 30-40대의 여성 22명으로 구성하였다. 피험자 구성은 탄성밴드를 사용하는 운동집단 11명과 탄성밴드를 사용하지 않는 비교집단 11명으로 구분하였으며, 자세의 정렬을 알기 위해 (주)MZEN사의 Body style의 카메라 및 프로그램을 이용하여 실험 전, 후 골반 및 신체의 각도를 측정 비교하였다. 탄성밴드 사용유무에 따른 골반교정 발레플로어 프로그램은 12주 동안 주 2회, 60분으로 진행하였다. 본 연구의 독립변인은 탄성밴드 사용유무에 따른 골반교정 발레플로어 프로그램이며, 종속변인의 측정 항목은 골반 좌․우 기울기 각도, 골반 전ㆍ후 기울기 각도 외에 경추기울기 각도, 어깨기울기 각도, 견갑골기울기 각도, 상체기울기 각도, 다리길이차이, 왼쪽 종골각 기울기 각도, 오른쪽 종골각 기울기 각도이다. Window용 SPSS 18.0 통계프로그램을 활용하여 얻은 결과는 다음과 같다. 첫째, 탄성밴드를 이용한 골반교정 발레플로어 프로그램 훈련 전과 후 골반 좌ㆍ우 기울기 각도, 골반 전․후 기울기 각도뿐만 아니라 경추 기울기 각도, 어깨 기울기 각도, 견갑골 기울기 각도, 상체 기울기 각도, 다리길이차이가 통계적으로 유의하게 감소하였다. 둘째, 일반 골반교정 발레플로어 프로그램 훈련 집단의 운동 전과 후 상체 기울기 각도, 다리길이차이, 오른쪽 종골각 기울기 각도에서만 통계적으로 유의하게 감소하였다. 그러므로 골반교정 발레플로어 프로그램은 자세교정에 효과적이나 탄성밴드를 이용하였을 때 더욱 효과적이라는 결론을 내릴 수 있다.

The purpose of this study was to investigate the elastic band based pelvic correction ballet floor program and to analyze the effect of women with childbirth on pelvis and posture. The participants for this study were 22 women aged 30 to 40 in Gangseo-gu, Seoul. The participants were divided into two groups and took general pelvic correction ballet floor program and pelvic correction ballet floor program using elastic band, respectively. MZEN Body Style was used to measure posture and its variables include pelvic and cervical spine, shoulder, scapular, calcaneal slope, gradient of upper body angle, and leg length difference. This study was performed during twice a week for 60 minute. For data analysis, SPPSS Win 18.0 was used the Wilcox signed rank test, and two-way analysis of variance. Statistical significance level was set at p<0.05. The results were as follows. The group using elastic band showed significant positive effects on the pelvis, cervical, shoulder, scapula, upper body, and leg length difference. The group without elastic band showed statistically meaningful results on the upper body angle, leg length difference, right calcaneal slope. Especially in pelvic angle calibration, pelvic correction ballet floor program using elastic band was much more effective than the general pelvic correction ballet floor program. Based on this study, I hope to verify the relationship between core strength and posture, and that will be performed later.

목 적: 방사선수술에 사용되는 치료계획을 위한 정위 영상 획득 때 사용되는 표시기(indicator)의 회전에 의한 오차를 분석하고 이를 교정하는 소프트웨어의 기능을 점검하는 방법을 제시한다. 이 방법을 이용하여 상용 프로그램인 렉셀감마플랜의 회전 오차 기능을 점검한다. 대상 및 방법: 상용 프로그래밍 언어인 Interactive Data Language(version 5.5)를 이용하여 소프트웨어적으로 만든 정위 영상으로 가상 팬텀을 만들었다. 영상의 두께는 0.5mm, 픽셀 크기 0.5 mm, 필드 크기 256mm, 그리고 분해능은 512x512이었다. 영상은 DICOM 3.0 표준을 따라서 렉셀감마플랜이 인식할 수 있도록 하였다. 회전 교정 기능 점검을 위하여 가상 팬텀의 중심에서 상하로 50mm와 30mm 떨어진 곳과 중앙에 위치한 횡단면 영상에 각각 50mm 간격으로 측정점 9개를 만들어 총 45개의 측정점을 만들었다. 기준 가상 팬텀을 x, y, z축을 중심으로 각각 3°회전한 영상, xy, yz, zx 축을 중심으로 각각 3°씩 회전한 영상, xyz 세 방향으로 모두 3°씩 회전한 영상을 만들어서 회전에 의한 오차를 계산하고, 렉셀감마플랜의 교정 기능을 점검하였다. 결과: 가상 영상을 렉셀감마플랜에 입력하고 정위좌표를 정의할 때 영상에 의한 등록 오차는 0.1±0.1mm로써 방사선수술에서 요구하는 오차 내에 있었다. x, y, z축 중 1개 축을 중심으로 3°회전할 때 가능한 최대 오차는 2.6 mm, 2개 축을 중심으로 3°씩 회전할 때는 3.7mm, 3개축 모두에 대해 3°씩 회전할 때는 4.5mm이다. 이에 대해 영상의 회전을 교정하여 렉셀감마플랜에서 측정한 측정점들의 변위 1개축을 중심으로 회전하였을 때 0.1±0.1mm, 2개 축의 경우 0.2±0.2mm, 3개 축의 경우 0.2±0.2mm로서 회전의 영향을 보정하는 기능이 정확하게 작동하고 있음을 확인할 수 있었다. 결론: 방사선수술 치료계획 프로그램의 여러 소프트웨어적 기능을 점검하기 위한 가상 팬텀을 만들고 상용프로그램의 회전 오차 교정 기능을 점검한 결과 정확하게 작동하고 있음을 확인하였다. 본 연구에서 작성한 가상 팬텀은 치료계획 프로그램의 다른 여러 기능들을 점검하는 데도 사용될 수 있을 것이다

Objective: This study analyzed errors due to rotation or tilt of the magnetic resonance (MR) imaging indicator during image acquisition for a stereotactic radiosurgery. The error correction procedure of a commercially available stereotactic neurosurgery treatment planning program has been verified. Materials and Methods: Software virtual phantoms were built with stereotactic images generated by a commercial programming language, Interactive Data Language (version 5.5). The thickness of an image slice was 0.5 mm, pixel size was 0.5x0.5 mm, field of view was 256 mm, and image resolution was 512x512. The images were generated under the DICOM 3.0 standard in order to be used with Leksell GammaPlan®. For the verification of the rotation error correction function of Leksell GammaPlan®, 45 measurement points were arranged in five axial planes. On each axial plane, there were nine measurement points along a square of length 100 mm. The center of the square was located on the z-axis and a measurement point was on the z-axis, too. Five axial planes were placed at z=-50.0, -30.0, 0.0, 30.0, 50.0 mm, respectively. The virtual phantom was rotated by 3° around one of x, y, and z-axis. It was also rotated by 3° around two axes of x, y, and z-axis, and rotated by 3° along all three axes. The errors in the position of rotated measurement points were measured with Leksell GammaPlan® and the correction function was verified. Results: The image registration errors of the virtual phantom images was 0.1±0.1 mm and it was within the requirement of stereotactic images. The maximum theoretical errors in position of measurement points were 2.6 mm for a rotation around one axis, 3.7 mm for a rotation around two axes, and 4.5 mm for a rotation around three axes. The measured errors in position was 0.1±0.1 mm for a rotation around single axis, 0.2±0.2 mm for double and triple axes. These small errors verified that the rotation error correction function of Leksell GammaPlan® is working fine. Conclusion: A virtual phantom was built to verify software functions of stereotactic neurosurgery treatment planning program. The error correction function of a commercial treatment planning program worked within nominal error range. The virtual phantom of this study can be applied in many other fields to verify various functions of treatment planning programs.

본 논문은 교도소 등의 교정공공재의 생산기관에서 행해지는 효행교육 등의 인성교육과 소년원 등의 보호 공공재의 생산기관에서 행해지는 인성교육의 문제점과 개선방안을 살펴보았다. 먼저 이론적 배경으로서 교도소 등의 교정기관과 소년원등의 보호기관의 기본개념과 효행교육이 행해지는 조직적 메커니즘을 살펴본 뒤에 기존의 선행연구들에 대한 검토를 비판적 관점에서 서술하였다. 그리고 나서 현재행해지고 있는 교정기관과 보호기관에서의 인성교육프로그램의 내용들을 살펴본 다음에 인성교육의 시행시기, 시행주체, 대상자, 내용, 평가 등의 측면에서 현행 인성교육프로그램의 문제점과 개선방안을 서술하였다.

In this article, I would like to explore a little further the proper direction and existing problems of humanistic education which correctional public service producing agency and protection public service producing agency including prison and reformatory have put into operation for correction of prisoner for a long time by path-dependence. As space is limited, I concentrated on the discussion to the humanistic education which is involved in prison and reformatory. First of all, I discussed the basic concept and organization mechanism of correctional public service agency and protection public service agency. Therefore, I raised my critical stance about humanistic education of correctional public service agency and protection public agency against the existing study. I discussed the content of humanistic education program in prison and reformatory. The proper direction and problems of humanistic education program can be classified into five main groups : beginning time, operation body, client, content, assessment.

온실가스 감축을 위한 탄소은행제는 개별 가구들의 온실가스 감축 노력에 대한인센티브를 제공하기 위하여 최근에 국내에 도입되어 운영되고 있다. 그러나 이러한 개별 인센티브 제도가 에너지 사용 절감 효과에 얼마나 기여했는지에 대한실증연구는 부족한 편이다. 이에 본 연구는 광주광역시에서 실시하고 있는 탄소은행제가 가정용 전력수요를 구조적으로 감소시켰는지를 시계열 계량모형을 이용하여 분석하였다. 이를 위해 단위근 및 공적분 검증을 실시한 결과 시계열이 공적분 관계에 있기 때문에 오차항 수정모형을 이용한 FM-OLS 추정법을 이용하여가정용 전력수요를 추정하였다. 분석 결과 탄소은행제가 가정용 전력수요를 구조적으로 감소시키는 것으로 나타났다.

As one of the CO2 emission reduction programs, the carbon banking program is designed to encourage individual efforts to reduce CO2 emissions. In this program, consumers earn eco-points that can be used to buy other goods and services if they reduce consumption on electricity, town gas, and source water. We estimated household electricity demand for Gwangju and examined if the carbon banking program affected significantly the household electricity demand. We found that monthly time series on electricity demand, electricity price, town gas price, population, and per capita gross regional income have cointegration relations. Thus we used fully modified error correction model (FMOLS) to examine the effect of carbon banking program on the household electricity demand. We found that the carbon banking program reduces significantly electricity demand.

The purpose of this study, as a project for health management at small workplace by Korean association of occupational health nurse, was to evaluate the program for correction of eating habits to prevent digestive disorders of workers. The study cases were twenty nine workers who voluntarily participated in the above program and they were from small(under fifty employees) workplace at Youngdeungpo-gu, Seoul. The study was done between January, 2000 and May, 2000. This program was concerned with daily menu for correction of eating habits and was composed of individual health education and distributing guide books and video. Nurses visited the workplace for the program once a week or two weeks. The result of this program was evaluated by paired t-test of digestive symptoms, eating habits, and self-efficacy before and after the fulfillment of the program. The result could be summarized as below. 1) There were decrease in digestive symptoms and improvement in eating habits and self-efficacy from study cases after fulfillment of the program. 2) The most common digestive symptoms were heartburn, upper abdominal pain, indigestion. The symptom which had been improved through the program were indigestion, heartburn and anorexia in the order. 3) The most improved eating habit was to eat flat foods instead of salty and spicy foods. The most improved self-efficacy was 'I can follow any helpful guides for my health'. The result indicated the program was successful for workers at small workplace. The continual management by nurses' regular visit once a week or two weeks was the most important thing for the successful program.

Objective: The purpose of this study was to investigate the effects of sling exercise on the cervical lordotic angle, craniovertebral angle, and head rotation angle among adolescents in the forward head posture. Methods: The subjects include 22 adolescents that recorded a mild level or higher on the posture evaluation index by New York State. They were randomly divided to the hand exercise group (n=11) and the control group (n=11). The former group participated in the sling exercise program three times a week over four weeks in total with each session lasting 60 minutes, whereas the latter group was not included in the program. The cervical lordotic angle, craniovertebral angle, and head rotation angle were measured before and after the intervention. Results: The study compared the cervical lordotic angle between the two groups before and after sling exercise and found that the sling exercise group made an increase of 7.36° from 21.91° to 29.27° after the intervention(p<.05). As for the comparison results of the craniovertebral angle, the sling exercise group made an increase of 5.64° from 48.91° to 54.55° after the intervention (p<.05). As for the comparison results of the cranial-rotation angle, the sling exercise group made an decrease of -7.73° from 148.82° to 141.09° after the intervention (p<.05). The control group showed no differences before and after the intervention (p>.05). Conclusion: Those findings indicate that the application of sling exercise in the forward head posture can be a good program to maintain the right posture and improve or prevent an abnormal posture and raise a need for more clinical applications and ongoing researches.

본고는 글쓰기가 미숙한 대학 신입생에게 과정 중심 글쓰기 교육이 효과가 있음을 설문조사를 통해 입증하고, 과정 중심 글쓰기에서 고쳐쓰기 교학생들의 글쓰기 수업 <사고와 표현>에서 실시한 고학년 멘토의 첨삭, 첨삭에 근거한 담당교수의 면 대 면 상담, 그리고 학생의 고쳐쓰기라는 3단계 피드백 방식을 대상으로 한다. 한림대학교 <우리글상담소(Writing Clinic)>에서 Nice Care 사업의 일환으로 진행한 글쓰기 첨삭 멘토링 프로그램은 멘토 선발 → 멘토 대상 첨삭 교육 워크숍 → 멘토의 첨삭(1,2차) → 담당교수진의 1:1 상담 → 글 고쳐 쓰기, 멘티 대상 만족도 조사 순으로 진행되었다. 첨삭 대상 글은 설명하는 글, 주장하는 글 2편이다. 먼저 첨삭과 상담, 고쳐쓰기에 대한 만족도 조사 결과 학생들은 글쓰기 능력 점검과 향상에 도움이 된다고 답했으며, 글쓰기 첨삭과 상담 횟수가 늘기를 희망했다. 학생들의 만족도가 가장 높은 항목은 글 수정하기였다. ‘글 수정하기’가 학생들의 만족도가 높은 것은 글쓰기 멘토의 첨삭프로그램과 담당교수의 상담과 연동하여 진행하였기 때문이다. 다음 장에서는 글쓰기 멘토 교육의 내용과 실제 첨삭 사례를 제시하였다. 실제 첨삭 사례에서 나타나는 부실한 점을 보완하고, 첨삭의 신뢰성을 높이기 위해 담당 교수의 상담 피드백이 진행되었으며, 주로 주제의 일관성과 명확성, 글의 구성 및 단락 안배와 관련하여 개선방안을 제시하는 데 초점을 맞추었다. 멘토링 프로그램은 글쓰기의 전문성을 담보한 인력 확보가 어려운 상황에서 비롯된 대안이다. 하지만 첨삭주체의 자질, 첨삭과 상담 주체가 다른 데서 빚어지는 난점 등이 문제로 남는다. 첨삭 멘토들의 첨삭 내용 및 질에서 나타난 편차를 줄일 수 있는 첨삭 지도 교육을 지속적으로 하고, 학생들의 글 고쳐쓰기가 좀더 적극적으로 이루어질 수 있는 방안을 모색하는 것이 과제로 남는다.

This thesis intends to show the effect of writing education which is focused on the process, and presents the example of redraft(or rewriting) through the results of survey. The object of this study is the third stages of writing feedback -the upper grades student’s correction of composition, teacher’s man-to-man consultation, and student’s rewriting-which is practiced by mentoring program in Hallym University . The mentoring program was progressed as follows. The recruit of mentor → workshop → mentor’s correction of composition → teacher’s man-to-man consultation → student’s rewriting and survey toward student. The students replied that the mentoring program helped the check and improvement of themselve’s writings, and wanted the more corrections and consultations. The best satisfied parts are ‘making outline’, ‘rewriting’. Because it is acted and related with the correction and man-to-man consultation. At next chapter, contents of writing mentor’s workshop and examples of correction about writings is presented. Specially, The teacher’s consultation could supplement and enhance the reliability of correction and the actual consultation was focused on the coherence and clearness of thesis, and construction or paragraph. This program was the alternate choice which is caused by the absence of specialist about writing program. However, the qualification of mentor and the separation between correction and consultation must be supplemented. It is needed that the workshop for the mentor and student’s positive will about rewriting must be enhanced.

The purpose of this study is to develop a posture correction exercise program based self-regulation using the intervention mapping protocol (IMP) in healthcare professional students. Participants of this study were healthcare professional students at a university in Korea. To develop a posture correction exercise program based self-regulation, literature review and focus group interview for 10 university students majoring in healthcare were conducted in 2016. Then, the program was developed based on IMP. The 6 stages of the IMP, consisting of 1) needs assessment, 2) creation of objectives, 3) selection of theory-based methods and practical strategies, 4) development of the program, 5) development of an adoption and implementation plan, and 6) development of an evaluation design, were utilized in this methodological study to develop the exercise program. For application of the theory-based strategies such as self-regulation, including self-observation, goal-setting, social support, environmental aids, reinforcement, and prevention of recurrence, the intervention program included health education, posture correction exercises, setting long- and short-term goals, and self-help groups. Additionally, group education and one-on-one counselling, and a mobile application were used as methods to implement this exercise program. It is expected that these posture correction exercise program based on self-regulation would be widely available as an intervention tool to improve the musculoskeletal health.

The objective of this study is to determine the extent to which foreign language learners can improve their writing capacities using a specific set of online instruction materials, the error-correction program online essay writing tool. Several years ago, the online error-correction program feedback tool was adopted by a number of universities in Korea. Since then, many instructors have started using online methods to teach writing. The error-correction program provides students with immediate essay feedback using tools that can analyze and critique writing automatically. 106 intermediate English university students participate in the study. 53 students participated in control group and 53 students participated in experimental group (Using Criterion group).

Objective: The purpose of this study was to investigate the effect of 3-dimensional posture correction(3DPC) exercise program incorporating PNF respiratory muscle strengthening(RMS) exercise on spinal alignment and trunk expansion in patients with idiopathic scoliosis and the difference in intervention effect by type of idiopathic scoliosis. Design: Comparative study using paired t-test and analysis of variance measures. Methods: The subjects of this study were 5 men and 24 women diagnosed with idiopathic scoliosis with a Cobb angle greater than 10 degrees and less than 45 degrees. A 3DPC exercise program incorporating PNF RMS exercise was conducted twice a week for 1 hour per session for 6 weeks, and Cobb angle, Angle of trunk rotation, and trunk expansion were measured before and after the intervention. Results: After the intervention, Cobb angle and trunk rotation angle showed a statistically significant decrease, and trunk expansion showed a statistically significant increase. In the effect difference by type, there was a statistically significant difference in the angle of trunk rotation of the thoracic in 3C and Single Lumbar. Conclusions: In conclusion, it is thought that a 3DPC exercise program incorporating PNF RMS exercise can be effectively used in clinical practice to improve spinal alignment and trunk expansion in patients with idiopathic scoliosis.

이 연구는 대학 내 글쓰기센터에서 운영되는 첨삭 프로그램의 개선을 위한 반성적 검토이다. ‘첨삭’은 글쓰기를 지도하는 가장 보편화된 방식이다. 또한 글을 지도하는 입장에서 학습자의 글쓰기 역량을 높이기 위한 가장 선호하는 방법이기도 하다. 그러나 다수의 학생 글에 대한 균질한 진단과 보다 효율적인 피드백은 여전히 개선해야 할 과제이다. 이 연구에서는 한성대를 중심으로 온라인 첨삭 프로그램의 운영 시스템을 다각도에서 점검해 보고 글쓰기센터의 정기 설문조사인 2020년도 1학기의 설문 답변을 토대로 그 개선 방안을 논의해 보고자 한다. 이를 위해 3장에서는 첨삭 프로그램을 위한 글쓰기센터의 운영 담당 조직과 운영 과정, 첨삭 프로그램 진행 과정 등의 운영 요건들을 살펴보았다. 4장에서는 온라인 첨삭프로그램의 개선 방안을 제언하였다. 개선 사항으로는 첨삭 조언자로서 참여자 간 공통과제 조건 소통과 인식, 첨삭자인 연구원의 역할, 과제의 연속성을 제안하였다.

The study is a reflective review for the improvement of the correction program run by the writing center in the university. ‘Correction’ is the most common way of guiding writing. It is also the most preferred way to enhance the learner’s writing skills from the standpoint of guiding writing. However, homogeneous diagnosis and more efficient feedback on a large number of student writings are still tasks that need to be improved. In this study, we will examine the operating system of the online correction program from various angles, focusing on Hansung University, and discuss ways to improve it based on the survey answers of the first semester of 2020, which is a regular survey by the writing center. To this end, Chapter 3 looked at operational requirements such as the organization and operation process of the writing center for the correction program and the progress of the correction program. Chapter 4 suggested ways to improve the online correction program. Among the improvements, communication and recognition of common task conditions among participants as correction advisors, role of the researcher as the correct person, and continuity of tasks were proposed.